Now that we all had agreed upon the first script all that was left was to add the finishing touch. We decided to not just add a little detail but we saw the script change quite a lot as we added more and more suspense to the story. At the end we all were happ6with the end result and the script was up to our expectations. We also decided the name of the story.
The final script:
"The Hide"
Act1 scene 1
• Setting of the play begins in an unpleasant emotion caused the threat of danger and pain as four people are running out of the woods. (in pure panic and chaos)
• Point of View Shot of Boy 1*He sees three people running Infront of him and makes a call to someone*.
• Lawyer: where are you?!
• Boy1: At the safe house like you asked me to be. *a crooked smile, cool and imperious*
(dip to black)
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Act 1 Scene 2
• (Close up shot) of a pair of hands (girl and boy) tied to a rope, trying to free themselves from the ropes.
• A shot of unconscious boy (boy 2) tied to the chair with a black cloth on his face.
• (panning shot of all three of them tied together in a broken dark room with no roof)
• A close up shot of girl panicking while boy 1 consuls her (nondiegetic)
• Girl: is he okay the other boy?
• Boy2: Don’t think so *remains calm and least bothered about the boy*
• A close up shot of girl trying to cut the ropes with her bracelet
• Boy1: what do you think you’re doing? They will Kill Us*Questioning yet surprised*
• Girl: Shut up and follow my lead
• Boy1: *rolls his eyes*
• (A shot of girl finally escaping her ropes.) excitement and hurries towards the boys whilst * her hands shivers*
• Boy1 HURRY UP BEFORE THEY CATCH US
• GIRL: I AM TRYING! DO NOT TRY TO CONFEUSE ME *frustrated and in worry*
• (Jump cut) they move towards the unconscious boy.
• Boy1 to boy2: wake up!!!*slapping his face*
• Boy 2: w…whhatsss going on?
• Jump cut
• All three of them escape the den.
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Act1 Scene 3
• Unanimous person: Your gonna pay me extra for this one or she’s dead. *tempting*
• (the embassy gets a call from a unanimous number and looses thier temper)
• Boy1: let’s go they might be looking for us*protagonist character*
• *Flashback the phone was never at the place of kidnapping*
• Jump cut
• (Kidnappers start looking for the people who aren’t there)
• Parallel editing (the three victims are running whilst one of them gets shot by the kidnappers)
• *gun shots fired and the Girl screams*
• (Boy1 places the phone back into boy 2 pocket the same way he found it while waking up boy 2)
